Conrad Rice

As far as what I like see from others, I will usually read fewer, longer entries over more, shorter ones. I have a short attention span and don't want to ...

Hi Kylan. Sorry it took so long for me to get to this last part of the story. Well, I have to say that you tied everything together very well ...

Well, Ky, here we go. I'll try to be as coherent as possible. So, this story is all right. It's not great, but it is good. Of course, the only ...

Hi Snoink! So, I have kind of a one up on this because you told me what the Brains were on MSN. I'll go into this review knowing that, but ...

The world returned in a whirl of sound. The whistling of the cold wind and the speaking of voices. Three, maybe four. Creep opened his eyes. The penthouse looked as ...

Okay Ky, I am here with my review. I remember you gave me an early copy of this chapter. This version here is a significant improvement on that. The part ...

Okay Ky, I just went over your revised Evergreen. I have to say that I prefer the old version to this one. This version seemed too long and clunky for ...

Hi Ky, Yes. This. This is it. You must submit this to the Lit Journal because this will be picked and you will become awesome and conquer Stephanie Meyer and ...

Okay, perhaps I should explain the lack of any other options. Because, really, I want to see what people think when push comes to shove. I really wanted to see ...

Okay, before I start this, I will admit that I am a hypocrite. I have done long, multi entry stories on YWS (I'm in the middle of one, actually.) But ...

This is a difficult problem, one I have had myself. The best advice I can give you is to just write anyway. Even if you don't like that first paragraph, ...

Kylan- I feel it necessary to repeat again that I am not fond of the first person points of view in this story. That may be because I am completely ...

Congratulations Jiggy. (is jealous.) :)

I get Writers Digest. I have to agree about the advertisements, they do seem to be rather excessive and stupid at times. However, I happen to find the articles to ...

I like the idea that you present here, and I think that it can turn into a very good story given enough time. However, I do want to caution you ...